Angel Walk Revised Poem by Aldo Kraas

Angel Walk Revised



The angel walk with me here on earth today
And he is wearing his unusual purple robe with golden trim
It looks so beautiful
I am glad that the angel walks with me in the streets of
Toronto Because I don't feel safe to walk in the streets of
Toronto alone
Oh dear anglel how I love you
I wished that you could walk with me every single day here on earth
But at the end of the day you must return to the sky
because you have To follow your orders from God
And I know that God is your boss and
you don't want to get into trouble From him
Yes angel here comes the end of the day
and you better return now to Heaven
Bye for now my angel
See you tomorrow again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 02 July 2014

Hmmm....I really don't see any revisions. Except that you corrected all of your spelling typos!

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