Wednesday, December 19, 2007

Anger I Thrive On Comments

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I have built it up
I have let it flow
Now its time to let it show
Pushed between him and her
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Danielle Franklin
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Who Iam 10 February 2008

Anger can destroy the best of things, some people use it as a weapon, your insight is very well taken and well written.

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You make an interesting point about anger. I love the opening how you built it up and then let it flow, it makes kind of a dam analogy that works well.

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Keith Young 27 December 2007

great poem it hit where it should on the hearts of others thanks for another great poem ur a great writer keep writing ok

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Danielle Franklin

Danielle Franklin

Mineral Wells, Texas
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