Sunday, October 7, 2012

Another Poem Comments

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The rose wilts,
Petal by petal.
The candle melts
Flicker by flicker.
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Mariam de Haan
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Guy Thierry Tenkouano 08 October 2012

Nice poem! Here's my attempt at guessing what you were thinking about 1-how till may seal destiny and only the present moment matters 2-how there's inextricably challenges and obstacles that rise but crumble under a chilled immovable personality The second one came at me randomly but i just decided to go with the flow and say it. Plus I believe sth about a flow is involved.

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Pemba, Tanzania
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