Can't walk anymore, on broken dreams road,
can't hold a hope for my hopless life!
How fool i was, didn't understand brutality of this world
how strong i was, when i was dreaming for my life
What they've gained after ruining my future?
or shall i accept it as my destiny and sigh!
still no guilt is found in their eyes...
& tears of mine, like dropp of blood, that falls & dies....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Tara - There is anote of dipair in this poem - but it does reflect what happens in real life.. V 1 A note of dispair - what went wrong? V 2 We all have dreams but life lets us down - and treats us unkindly. V 3 Poses a question - Do others acctually gain form our downfall or is it destiny? V 4 It is a fact of life - when others treat us badly - they don't but in the end we do. This is a well structured poem with a salutary message. I score it a 10 for structure and content. Yours - JOHN.