Apart Poem by Harriett Bishop

Apart

Rating: 4.8


i am torn apart when you leave me for work i contdown the hours till i see you again i am glad when you come home you make me come alive when ever you are a round but.................................... we had the great times together but it was not meant to be please dont leave me i will die with out your love without you i fall apart i miss you so much come back to me tonight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Archer 18 November 2008

wow, your soo good at writing im very impressed by the way your form matches content

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Ian Singer 05 November 2008

i loved it very good

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