Apart Poem by Harriett Bishop

Apart

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i am torn apart when you leave me for work i contdown the hours till i see you again i am glad when you come home you make me come alive when ever you are a round but.................................... we had the great times together but it was not meant to be please dont leave me i will die with out your love without you i fall apart i miss you so much come back to me tonight

Wednesday, November 5, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: home,together,work
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Archer 18 November 2008

wow, your soo good at writing im very impressed by the way your form matches content

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Ian Singer 05 November 2008

i loved it very good

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