[aphrodite, My Immortal Love…] Poem by Empath In flames

[aphrodite, My Immortal Love…]

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She was all alone…
Inside my eyes.
As her scene cast a gentle
haze of fuschia dreams.
Dissolving my knees
To a deep tremor,
of desired love…

My Phrygian princess
How I loath your ancient control,
Unwillingly, for am I
forever devoted to you?
poisoned by arrow, must I be? ? ?

If I was to drive this blade,
through my heart.
Would you cry for me…

~Could my bleeding soul,
Serve such a purpose?
Would it set me free? ? ? ~

If I was to die,
In front of you.
Would you notice my plea…

~Will this feeling,
Devour within me?
would this pain ever leave.~

I will fade for you…

Fade for you…

Fade …

For you…

~My immortal love…~

~Empath~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 11 April 2008

Had to come back to this, this poetry is 'to die for' but even though you offer yourself up, it's far better that you didn't. Love is so fickle is it not? HG: -) xx

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Original Unknown Girl 13 March 2008

Most passionate penning, Empath! HG: -) xx

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