Sunday, December 20, 2009

Archway Comments

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We are building
That archway
Today
And I am feeling so good about
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Aldo Kraas
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Colleen Courtney 02 July 2014

I really wish this poem would have continued to include what kind of arch was being built and why. It's a little disappointing in that you start with a great lead in and then nothing gets delivered.

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