Lendsy Salcedo

Lendsy Salcedo

Canaman Camarines Sur, Philippines
Friday, October 14, 2016

Art Of Letting Go Comments

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Holding you so tight
is a means for me to fight.
Keeping you in my arms
is a way to avoid any chasm.
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Lendsy Salcedo
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Daniel Brick 14 October 2016

Wow, this is an honest poem, and its honesty is a real sacrifice of ego and selfishness. In the first part you show how slippery love can be and how easily it is lost, so you do what you have to do to hold on to it. Then you realize, or a part of you realizes, This not right! and you let the trapped lover free. That was the right thing to do. N-O-W you have to take care of you (of course, you do! I'm revealing the obvious.) This is so admirable! !

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Lendsy Salcedo

Lendsy Salcedo

Canaman Camarines Sur, Philippines
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