Freshman - 912 Points (19/12/93 / Sonepur, ODISHA< INDIA)

As A New Feedback - Poem by TADASHA TRIPATHY

The blasting below the first step
Is the cause of stillness
Legs want to go ahead
Steps wait to take to high
May be with a new blast again.

The reward of first word
Is the cause of unlimited silence
Lips want to deliver the heart
Mind wants to speak again
But may be the first reward
Wait as a new feedback
At a step ahead.

Comments about As A New Feedback by TADASHA TRIPATHY

  • Gajanan Mishra (8/8/2013 7:22:00 PM)

    deliver the heart, very fine, I like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 28, 2013

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