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A Knife Behind Me.

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A knife behind me
With a cover of smile
Makes me aware
How strong am I?
Whispering sounds
Dancing around
Make me aware
How able am I?
The environment behind
Often pokes at, that present in front
May be not to pass a way
May be to make me aware that
The while of time never stops
Neither stopped before me
Nor can be stopped
Even after me.
Sunday, August 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: visionary
Dr Antony Theodore 12 August 2017
The feeling of having a knife behind can make us really strong to face all that can come........ a warning and also to get ready to face.... thank you for this poem dear poetess. tony
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Edward Kofi Louis 03 February 2016
To watch your steps in life. Thanks for sharing.
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Amitava Sur 01 October 2014
A thoughtful poem, whether irrespective of a knife, whisper or environment, they all alert you about the stumbling side of the life's path so that mentally you get strong enough to move forward boldly and convincingly.
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Chinedu Dike 17 September 2014
A good poem indeed. Artfully penned with depth of insight. Thanks for sharing.
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Geetha Jayakumar 01 September 2014
Beautiful poem Tadasha. There is often knife behind us to make us alert and stronger ever. Time will keep on moving nor we can stop it. I loved it.
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Abhipsa Tripathy 26 August 2014
Yes, its true that neither the time had been stopped before nor will be stopped. Very nice poem.
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Somanathan Iyer 25 August 2014
As long we are aware the situations alertness exists. Time keeps moving unmindful of any. Nice expressions!
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Akhtar Jawad 25 August 2014
A great poem Tadasha, I really loved it.
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 August 2014
The mind set creates the problem reason may be any knife is always behind the best metaphor used knife lovely thanks
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Gajanan Mishra 24 August 2014
no one is there to stop you, my dear daughter, go on. wonderful.
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