As The Blade Entered My Heart Poem by Aldo Kraas

As The Blade Entered My Heart



As the blade entered my heart
Before
I died
I felt
Pain
And
It lasted
A few hours
Until I was
Dead

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 03 July 2014

Oh my goodness! I certainly hope this is not a premonition of what is to be in store for you! No person deserves to suffer for such a long period of time before finally passing over to their next leg of their journey. I'm sure what is meant by this poem is that someone hurt you deeply and as far as that goes it really does seem as if the pain will last forever. Nicely expressed.

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Aldo Kraas

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