Friday, February 15, 2008

As We Move Across The Time Comments

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As we move by the time
All seem to be in its glory as past
We do feel pride of our universe
rejoicing when blessed by the divine
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Dr subhendu kar
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CU2urDream Lost 24 February 2008

when in answer to her prayer life was pro longed the greatful she rendered to god a tribute of praise for his grateful mercy. in this poem as you move the time its seems to be in his glory.....well penned dear one.

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Jing Jing 23 February 2008

as we move by the time all seem to be in glory as past...wow...totaly meaningful and another beautiful work.

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good bye 23 February 2008

dr, this is very beautiful write, thanks for sharing.... Micah

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Emancipation Planz 17 February 2008

'we all suffer the silence over the dust left off'.. each line reflects what amounts to nanoseconds, but getting around to dusting off silent debris can sometimes take longer... enjoyed the contemplation of this 'movement'...

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