Saturday, June 14, 2008

Ashes To Ashes, Dust To Dust Comments

Rating: 3.0

my sister so dear
I hurts me seeing you like this
wounded the same way as me
your eyes filled with fear
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Debbie Steyn
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 14 June 2008

Hello Debbie, Loyd here. This is a very heart felt poem about a very true loving relationship. Good work my friend. FYI: you have one misspelled word in first stanza 'the' Please visit my poems when you have time, you might enjoy 'One Again' thank you, L C Taylor

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