Asleep Poem by kat remz

Asleep

Rating: 2.5


I can hear your breath echoing
the sound of your heart beating against your chest

so rhythmic and calm
so sweet and steady

your brown hair in your face
your blue eye's tucked away behind the lids

even if I can't be by you
I can still feel you by me and I hope you can feel me the same

as I sit here and dream of you I only hope
you can dream of me too.

Tuesday, November 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: calm,peaceful,sleeping
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brad Brandon 01 November 2016

I like the descriptiveness of this poem. It describes just how I feel. Thank you.

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Gajanan Mishra 01 November 2016

life in love with heart beating

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