Asleep Poem by Rajdeep Dhanuka

Asleep

Rating: 4.5


Said the orange clouds at the horizon
They had to spend time
With the moon.
So they sang a lullaby for the sun,
And I was asleep...

Asleep
Friday, August 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: horizon,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 18 August 2017

Truly amazing, Rajdeep. This verse draws me back to my childhood. Excellent. A 10.

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Rajdeep Dhanuka 18 August 2017

glad you liked it... :)

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Rini Shibu 18 August 2017

Lovely.. Lullaby gorgeous the sun

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Rajdeep Dhanuka 18 August 2017

:)

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