Tuesday, April 24, 2007

Asleep Or Awake Comments

Rating: 5.0

She parts me like he used to
with care and love
not rushing me like i was used
but being tender with love like i was her child.
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Brittany Jones
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John Tiong Chunghoo 29 March 2008

you can treat life as a dream though. dead is an awakening in the other realm. so this realm is a mere dream.

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This poem has a sweet emotionalism and maybe a bit of meaning that floats just outside my grasp. I very much enjoyed reading this. Peace, L&T

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