At Tilly's House 1965 Poem by Terry Collett

At Tilly's House 1965



I went to Tilly's house
after work
got the bus there
walked the country lane.

Her mother
opened the door.

O its you
she said.

I nodded
in affirmation.

You best come in
she said grudgingly
how was Richmond?

I hesitated for a moment
had she guessed
or was she fishing.

It was fine
I said.

She closed the door
after me
Tilly was in Richmond
the same time as you
she said
standing at the doorway
to the living room.

Was she?
God what
a coincidence
if I'd know
we could have met
I said.

Yes couldn't you
she said
and walked off.

I sat on a sofa
no one else
was there
her sister
and brothers
were out.

After a few moments
Tilly came
didn't know
you were coming
she said.

Thought I'd
surprise you
I said.

You have
she said
she sat down
Mum knows you
were at Richmond
the same time
as I was
although she
doesn't know
we met
I think
she suspects.

I thought she might
by her manner
how are you?
I said.

All right
work is a bore
but it pays my bills
and allows me
to get the clothes
I want and not
what my mother
buys any more.

She kissed me
briefly
and you how are you?
she said.

Better now
after that kiss
I said
wishing her old lady
wasn't there
so we go
and try out
Tilly's bed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 01 June 2017

Ah, mothers. They can't be fooled! Better now after that kiss- - Music to every girl's ears! Absolutely LOVE your writings, Terry. They are mini-slices of life.

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