Tuesday, February 23, 2016

Atlantis Comments

Rating: 5.0

Out in the chill seas of yesterday,
Where the waters are aching and break in tear spray,
And the beat of the waves that come crashing in pain
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Herbert Kaufman
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Chinedu Dike 27 February 2016

Piece of great elegance, well articulated and insightfully penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Lovely romantic poem subtly written from the heart in beautiful poetic diction. Thanks for sharing.

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