Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Autumn Mist Comments

Rating: 5.0

My feet are walking round on creaky floors,
And the cool autumn mist surrounds them.
My mind is closed to open doors,
And the life that follow behind them.
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Matthew Romano 07 June 2011

Zoe this is fantastic from the opening line right through to the closing line. I particularly love the lines 'For in misleading fog my life is made, And i start my slow decease.' It's such an emotional and deep piece and I think it's wonderful.

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