Monday, June 11, 2007

Autumn Prayer Comments

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The leaves
Of
The
Trees
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Aldo Kraas
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Colleen Courtney 04 July 2014

Oh! What a hugely disappointing write! This is one of the most perfect opening lines I've come across and then that's the only line you write? First this would be an observation or a thought. Not a poem. Second, it's shameful, because it really could have been a great line that opens to a beautiful poem. Tsk! Tsk! Tsk!

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