Saturday, November 7, 2009

Baby (2006) Comments

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What could you have, might have been
Besides the world to me?
What would you have, should have been
If destiny we had beat?
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Melissa Leddy
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Deborah Cromer 07 November 2009

Nice way of writing out some pain. This poems uses words and thoughts to produce questions and insight. Good way of writing out feelings in a way that is clear to understand. Good job! Debbie

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