Baby Girl All I Want Is One Try Poem by miguel sanchez

Baby Girl All I Want Is One Try



baby girl where are you i want you and i need you so please here my sing let me know wat on your mind, n so i can tell u how i feel in side so please let me know wat do you say all i want is one try cuz i know i can all ways treat you so rite cuz i know you hard to find so my love is so real it so true hard to belive u prb think dis is a dream na baby iam leting you know whats on my mind cuz i saw you past in my site so iam here to make you mine if you let me show you one night dat iam your guy so let me know girl yea iam here fo you till i die :) and when i do i be up in da skys looking after you: (r

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sayz LFlynn 09 January 2010

Miguel this poem is, no doubt, writen from the heart of love. I liked the over all theme and structure but.... some of the spelling errors let it down. Just by changing them It could be a great poem! ! Keep writing from the heart! Sayz :)

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