Friday, February 18, 2011

Battlefield Comments

Rating: 5.0

The bitter taste of failure, my goal, it seems, unreached,
The final hurdle trips me, sees me fall,
The message that I lived for, the values that I preached,
They failed me, they did not heed my call,
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Daniel Parker
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2011

A painful disposition, I sit and think, alone, I wallow in the pity of my dreams, .. time to revive hopes.. nice poem...10

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