Your poem aptly portrays the pains and sufferings of a young woman with a broken heart, which you yourself are one as mentioned in the note.
'she reaches for her liquor.' is perhaps not the answer to forget the pain regain strength.
'She will make love to strangers, ' is perhaps even more dangerous.
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Your poem aptly portrays the pains and sufferings of a young woman with a broken heart, which you yourself are one as mentioned in the note. 'she reaches for her liquor.' is perhaps not the answer to forget the pain regain strength. 'She will make love to strangers, ' is perhaps even more dangerous.