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Be Aware Of A Girl With A Broken Heart Comments

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Be aware,
of a girl with a broken heart,
She gave her everything,
but in the end was ripped apart.
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Ashleyyy Mooney
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Khairul Ahsan 09 December 2013

Your poem aptly portrays the pains and sufferings of a young woman with a broken heart, which you yourself are one as mentioned in the note. 'she reaches for her liquor.' is perhaps not the answer to forget the pain regain strength. 'She will make love to strangers, ' is perhaps even more dangerous.

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