Be Me Poem by Danie Babcock

Be Me

Rating: 5.0


Waking up in the morning,
To falling asleep at night,
To the darkest that surrounds me,
To the point that its too bright.

Music soaring in one room,
A figure laying across a bed,
Being alone,
No troubles,
Seeming to be dead.

Keeping to myself,
Writing,
More than a single poem.
Accepting my mind
as my only home.

I'm alone and i love it!
Its the only place to be free,
The place i can spill my feelings,
The place i can be me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philosophy of a DewyFlower 11 September 2009

Accepting my mind as my only home---> the best lines for me keep your pen busy your thoughts are so deep/ 10 for your mind, your only home

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Stephanie Starr 31 July 2009

This is a beautiful poem! I could never write that well at your age. Keep it up!

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