Beaten Poem by danielle bennett

Beaten



you may wonder why some things happen the way they do
why you get hurt all of the time
in so many ways that you can't explain
I used to always get beaten by everyone
at time people still do beat me
most the time i've really done nothing
ever since I got my heart broken
a few weeks ago
everything bad happen s to me
I had thought I stopped it all
but me losing my life
made it all come back into my life
hurting my and destroying everything

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Afzal Shauq 05 July 2009

used to always get beaten by everyone at time people still do beat me most the time i've really done nothing ever since I got my heart broken seems reality thats why writen from th core of your innocent heart..rich idea and the flow is very much potic and meaningful thoughts.. well done..10++++++++

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