danielle bennett

Rookie (8/15/95 / Kingman, Arizona)

Please - Poem by danielle bennett

for everything i've done to you
that; s ever hurt you
in any possible way
i'm very sorry for it
it's something I never ment to do
if I could I would go back in time
so that I could make sure it never happened
it was never supposed to happen like that
but there's really nothing I could do
I had no control over it
my body had taken control over itself
and wouldn't let me stop
i'm sorry for everything I did
I hope you can forgive me...


Comments about Please by danielle bennett

  • (7/31/2008 4:54:00 PM)

    You need some practice, but this poem is so sincerely written it touches ones heart without you being the greatest expert.9/10
    Please check some of mine too, perhaps youll like it.Rate it and comment if you can, constructive criticism is also welcome, if youre into small poems please read two.
    If youre more into complex poems check number 2 or 3.
    Thankyou,
    Kilian
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  • Chris Newlash (7/31/2008 4:54:00 PM)

    Great poem, read some of mine you might like them! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 31, 2008



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