'Beautiful Loner' Poem by Ovi Odiete

'Beautiful Loner'

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he walks alone; faking a smile
deep within are pairs of agonies
grief, distraught; but still he smiles
walking down the pavement, he stops
turning around are unfriendly friends
they wave at him; camouflaging a smile
he looks away and continues

He has moved thus far, still no one
he hears the birds chipping; the cats crying and water falling
the queen of the night's flower arouse him; bringing him to a rush of impulse and pleasure, but still he wanders

they have stabbed him twice; his closest pals
they set him up; they slander him behind the scene and still rush to.him with cold hands
he has decided to stay firm; a man of his own- to walk through the valley alone; A Beautiful Loner.

Sunday, July 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful,lonely
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the calmness of the silent man, should not be toiled with'

Originally written 2014,
First published 2015 on Hello Poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Igho Odiete 04 July 2016

How well you have described the character through poetry. Well done

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Ovi Odiete

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Sapele, Nigeria
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