Wednesday, July 13, 2011

Bed Me Comments

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Keep me close to your heart
Let your breathe lure my eyes to dream,
May my whole be locked within the warmth of your bosom?
Oh how I love to make home your eyes
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Job Laz
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Unwritten Soul 17 July 2011

I feel i have to comment on this poem haha, it just a good work and yes it sounds great...Your love feeling really look like bed you...i csn see some smile there, it just nice :) Send more from your soul to share with us! _Unwritten Soul

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Tai Chi Italy 14 July 2011

Excellent Title, and the poem is awash with loving sentiment that no reader could walk away from without a smile. You are in love. May your muse forever hold you close. Smiling at you more Tai

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