Thursday, April 10, 2008

Bed Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

The weakness of my days alone
Caring sleepless place unknown
Gleeing that my two ends meet
Knowing what's below my feet
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 September 2008

Nice rendition of transition between consciousness......in a poetic bed! Nice works Shaynna.I luvitt!

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