Saturday, January 18, 2014

Being Homeless Comments

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I couldn't take the abuse anymore
So six months ago I walked out the front door
The violence is something that I won’t miss
And with nowhere to go I became homeless
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Tatianna Smith
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Laquell Campbell 19 January 2014

I enjoyed this poem a lot. The double line rhyming really kept my attention. I never really thought of homeless people like this before. The plot is very interesting.

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Khairul Ahsan 19 January 2014

I put myself in the shoes of a homeless person and wrote about my journey and expressed my feelings. Well done! A nice poem.

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