Tuesday, February 6, 2018

Beloved Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I left your father in marriage
T'was to protect you from constant disparage
Of hurling, hurtful rows of enrage
Those sourced from pain on a rampage
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Priti Pauline
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Fatou Mbow 13 October 2021

Speller and grammar checker English No mistake detected! Your heart squeezed mine and then it opened, wide. Thank you Pauline, for the depth of pain, and that of truth, and the beauty of love

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Chinedu Dike 06 February 2018

Rich flow of thought vivacious with emotions. Deep feelings expressed with a wonderful command of the language. Gracing your poems with beautiful rhyme scheme is not only appropriate, but also poetically remarkable. A great poem. Thanks for sharing Pauline and do remain enriched.

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Priti-Pauline 28 January 2021

Thank you Chinedu. I greatly appreciate your appreciation. I now know you really do know!

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