Thursday, June 2, 2016

Beloved Daughter Comments

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Pray ceaselessly, send prayers to God
Who planned, formed you and sent
You into our family like a gold
Nugget packaged and meant
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John Sensele
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Rajnish Manga 02 June 2016

The poet has nicely captured the gratitude towards God and thrill on the birth of a daughter in his loving family. At times, it is an address to the Almighty: Who planned, formed you and sent You into our family like a gold.... Grace family, community and society

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John Sensele 21 June 2016

Rajnish, I'm humbled by your generous comments. Like you, I juggled words and sometimes manage to stitch a tapestry that connoisseurs may find palatable. Sincere thanks for the encouragement.

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