Belovedmotherland Poem by Lusiana Deborah

Belovedmotherland



I lived in paradise,
.....I thought so,
my land's face look so beautiful,
.....I thought so,
but....
sometimes it looks worst than hell,
I think so.

The motherland is crying...
but....who's care?
only the true country-man can heard her weep.

what can I say....
too much words can't help it,
but....
I choose write more words,
hope my words cure my beloved motherland,
more words I shared, more hope I hope....

Wednesday, May 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: country,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Hope for the better life, in better land.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Oratile Diratsagae 09 May 2018

Some poets are gifted and you one of them. Thanks

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Lusiana Deborah 09 May 2018

this what I thought about my country, It could be worse, could be. but as long as there's a hope, I do believe there's hope for better country.

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