Cleo Blue

Rookie - 0 Points (Midnight / The Dark Cloud of Angels)

Beneath Me - Poem by Cleo Blue

I felt my heart break as i walked away
I want you to come back
But thers nothing i can say
I can only listen
To my tears hitting the cold pavement beneath me...

I felt my soul slowly drift away,
I've made up my mind
I'm going to leave today.
With a small movement of the object in my hand
I've left the worrld i hope you understand
I travel up into the sky
Looking down i see you cry
I'm better off up here
Dont you see?
I start to cry, myself,
As i see you all crying beneath me


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Yes she commited suicide this one is not about me as i am still here i dont plan on commiting suicide anytime soon... And someone FOR THE LOVE OF ARTEMIS PLEASE COMMENT! ! IF YOU DONT LIKE ARTEMIS COMMENT FOR APOLLO SINCE HE IS THE GOD OF POETRY ANYYWAY! ! IF YOU DONT LIKE THEM COMMENT FOR PETE WHOEVER THE FREAK HE IS! ! Thanks for reading and seriously please comment....

Comments about Beneath Me by Cleo Blue

  • (2/4/2013 10:18:00 PM)


    You see that guy? not the devil but the rick guy who commented? You see him? Yea he commented but NOT ONLY did he press the send button once BUT HE ACCIDENTLY PRESSED IT THREE TIMES! Which makes him awesome also bcuz of the fact that he doesnt have a tooshi anymore bcuz he laughed it off.. so go on be like Rick.. comment, and laugh your tooshi off..
    Thank you Rick... For laughing your azz off on my behalf
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  • Rick Adriolo (2/3/2013 5:29:00 PM)


    Laughing my ass of just reading everything exept your poems.. nice karakter you are.. and your poems are great! Really loving it! 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rick Adriolo (2/3/2013 5:28:00 PM)


    Laughing my ass of just reading everything exept your poems.. nice karakter you are.. and your poems are great! Really loving it! 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rick Adriolo (2/3/2013 5:26:00 PM)


    Laughing my ass of just reading everything exept your poems.. nice karakter you are.. and your poems are great! Really loving it! 10+ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 29, 2013



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