Saturday, September 7, 2013

Beneath My Rock Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ought I not to hide beneath this rock
remaining still though barely safe
from all who mock and snide my worth
to cause this frown upon my head
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David Ratcliffe
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Heather Wilkins 03 October 2013

come out from behind that rock and face tomorrow a good write

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Clifton Redmond 02 October 2013

A brilliantly scribed masterpiece, just perfectly described with some serious depth and left me rather reeling.

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David Ratcliffe 19 September 2013

Written when in a low state of mind and with no perceivable way out. Alone and left to rot with the only place to hide is beneath my rock

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