Monday, March 27, 2006

Beneath The Surface She Resides Comments

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I stared once down
Through shifting mud
To a cold, still woman
And rode upon her breath.
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Ashley Hawkes
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Dan Tharp 27 March 2006

That is it... I am adding you to my list of friends... The only thing I would change in this poem is the opening and closing line. Personally, I would say, 'I once stared down.' But, that is all a matter of preference... =) dan

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Ashley Hawkes

Ashley Hawkes

Hawera, Taranaki, New Zealand
Ashley Hawkes
Ashley Hawkes
Hawera, Taranaki, New Zealand
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