Monday, September 1, 2014

Betrayed Comments

Rating: 3.8

Can't you feel it?
Wasn't it your fault?
Deny it all you want
But that bitter taste hurts
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Vanessa Parodia
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Chinedu Dike 11 October 2014

When you trust someone wholeheartedly, and that person betrays you not in a thoughtless way, but in a thoughtful and self serving way, it is always very difficult to forgive that person. A well articulated and nicely penned poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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