Between You And Sports Poem by Maria Jose Cid Velazquez

Between You And Sports

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Skating is the lost dream
that I once had
the one that was never with you
but always in my mind.

Swimming is to come back to the past
the moment where I first met you
that's why to be in water
means to see you by my side.

So I remember the water
with fresh splashes
and the wonderful sight of you
swimming along the pool.

Then I'll go
deep under the sea
and go over a great slope
to skate through my dreams
and be under the water to refresh my soul
walking always along streams

Tuesday, May 22, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: sports,swimming,water
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gil Cordoba 04 September 2007

AHHH PUES EL POEMA ES GENIAL, SE PODRIA DECIR QUE ES FANTASTICA, ME DEJO ALGO IMPRESIONADO Y SORPENDIDO Y MAS PORQUE EL POEMA SE ENFOCA MUCHO A ALGO YA SUCEDIO, JEJEJE, APARTE CREO QUE EL NOMBRE DE LA POETISA ME ES MUY SONADO, CREO CONOCERLA Y MAS DE LO QUE PIENSAN, AUN ASI MARIA JOSE CID VELAZQUES ES GENIAL, GRAX POR ESCRIBIR TAN BONITO POEMA

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