Saturday, June 6, 2009

Beyond Blue Comments

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Far beyond blue
Far, far beyond the hue
of eucalypt dappled leaves tippling red in the sunlight
Far beyond the yellow cheeked black cockatoo poised
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Sue Wildman
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Laurence Bourke 06 June 2009

I LOVED THIS POEM, your imagery here is so vivid and exact, i really feel light hearted hearing this peice sail through mind mind, your word choice was so good too, and the ending was great, many times over i really liked this piece! ! keep it up! !

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