Monday, September 15, 2008

Bird Of The Small Hours. Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the air was silent
And the trees slept still
No wind a whispering
It’s sullen winter chill
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Cheryl McDonnell
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Dear fellow Cheryl. In your poem you don't mention any bird (only in the Title) . But I can hear it, flying and singing. Thanks for sharing. I give it high a grade. And I offer you my poem I offer to you my new poems THE OTHER BIRD, EROS-PTEROS. You may grade them (or other poems you may like) . Thanks Joseph Josephides (Member of the Intern.Society of Poets(ISP, ILP awarded)

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