Bits Of Poem Poem by Kanchan Dubey

Bits Of Poem

Rating: 4.5


What is this poem,
But merely bits of my heart and soul
Make me forget of all the pain I hold
I put my heart on the line
It has managed to fail me
What can I do but numb it alive
Suffering is what I call only mine
Is this my future
Or is it my life

Thursday, November 22, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: future
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom J. Mariani 22 November 2007

Same as my comments on your poem 'A Cold November.' I would only add Sandra M. Gilbert's collection of poems, 'ghost volcano' where she writes about the unexpected death of her husband. Keep working on your craft and I think you will find that you can add to the bits of your heart and soul in future poems. Tom

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