Bitter End Poem by Aidin Azarkerdar

Bitter End

 


Life… Begin of grief
Sometime, I cry and walk by grief
Carry signs of die
Always I try
Endure my pine
I live into lie
I married with die
Begin of my life
Started to my pains
Lament to my life
Shadows wail in the midday
I wish I fly to Culminate in the sky
Free from my pine
Now, I see end of dark line of my life
Maybe there is trust
Trust to grasp of my lost

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 17 July 2011

You write with dark ink..dark as your emotion told...It gave some taste of bitter here, nice write but Hey this wont be everlast bitter to your end, the days still long to conclude, cheer some...But yes, it has a good bitter to fit the bitter title :) Keep writing :) _Unwritten Soul

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Melissa Broomhead 20 January 2007

this was great, your english is getting better. i noticed you spelled pain as pine and some times you used the wrong tense of death, but your poem is great

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Gerry Vehd 18 January 2007

When I saw the title of this poem I reminded myself Placebo - Bitter End... How will sound with melody... Keep Siling! Gerry

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