Bitter End

Rating: 2.8

Drowning, choking
On my pride
You said you loved me
But you lied
And that's when something
inside me died
Now I guess this is
our last good-bye.

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Theodora Onken 12 February 2005

This reminds us of another members older poem... Your title and his end are the same... How is it up In Vancouver? So Much said, in so little words... Good, very good, Thank You...

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Theodora Onken 11 February 2005

Wasn't this originally entitled Last Goodbye, because I saved it, last night? I am feeling, quite the same way!

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