Monday, August 8, 2005

Black Comments

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black as the darkest of the night
her neck is stained now, once so white
i thought she cried, i thought he heard
but blueness was of no concern
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Kitty Marie Lucas
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Jerry Hughes 09 August 2005

strange poem, Kristen. The end line, 'though she has black colors now/.' I find this interesting, yet disturbing.

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Kitty Marie Lucas

Kitty Marie Lucas

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