Thursday, July 14, 2011

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Sailing upon the oceans of words
Spoken by her wild countenance
Makes my heart coddle my eyes,
For her charm glues my eyes
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Tai Chi Italy 14 July 2011

For a title that sounds quite stark, this poem has a fine romantic countenance! Every line beautifully written. 'comely clicks' brilliant. Greedily eating up your poetry with a smile from Tai

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