Onyx Blake

Rookie (July 3,1996 / Chicago, Ilinois, USA)

Black Sheep... - Poem by Onyx Blake

In my families eyes i am a fool...
Never did well in school...
I might as well be gool...
In a bloody pool of their hearts...
I am like bits of parts in their minds...
ugly, stupid, nasty, weak...
my consequinces with them are so deep...
Its like climbing up mount everest, sio vast and steep...
with my family i am like a black sheep...


Comments about Black Sheep... by Onyx Blake

  • Angelic Warrior (6/18/2009 9:15:00 PM)

    that really sucks...and i feel the same way...only i'm worse i put on a show for my family to try to seem like i fit in but i don't feel like i do....they only congratulate me for the things i'm not proud of.....life sucks
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  • Onyx Davis (12/1/2008 11:50:00 AM)

    i'm defintely gonna read more of your poetry (Report)Reply

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  • Stephanie Dower (10/12/2008 3:10:00 PM)

    I can totally relate to some of this. Great poem, thanks for sharing! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 15, 2008


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