Blank Story Poem by celestial jewel

Blank Story

Rating: 4.5


you said u and I..
we can make a wonderful story
together...
and yes we have made our own story
u have made a great opening
u have impressed me...
u wrote beautiful words
I added some words too
to beautify our story
now i want to know more
it is your turn now...to write down your words
who will finish this story
you?
me?
or both of us

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 15 June 2010

very nice dear... how u began together..... how u went on together. how to procede now.. everything poetic.. thinking of a future.. in poetic expressions. thank you dear celestial.

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