California West

Rookie (3/11/98 / kentucky)

Bleeding My Love - Poem by California West

my blood spills to the concreat floor
blood comesfrom my mouth with the screams
i scream in pain
the blood warm and red like a scarlet ocean
blood spills from my body easily
it leaves me comfortably
my hands on the cold concreate
th blood forms a puddle around me
i see the chalk outline of my body
my strength is impelling
the darkness surounding me
i am forever bleeding my love to you


Comments about Bleeding My Love by California West

  • (5/24/2010 11:29:00 PM)


    very nice. it very well detailed i can really feel the concrete
    keep em coming
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 4, 2010



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