Sunday, August 14, 2016

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No i am not a failure but i fear
An unpleasant emotion causing threat
I failed, but never lost hope
I fear god Oh yes, i do fear i fear losing my family, i fear losing my best friends
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Navjyot Chandnani
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Menato San 15 August 2016

Nice. Thanks for sharing

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Kelly Kurt 14 August 2016

I would recommend not abbreviating words, especially with slang (Instead of 'Coz, write, 'Because) and not capitalizing words for emphasis. I am always impressed when someone can write well in a second language. Keep practicing and posting, Navjyot

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Kelly Kurt 14 August 2016

Many do not fully appreciate what they already have. Thanks, Navjyot

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